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Kia ora bloggers
Yesterday we had to write a paragraph about our favourite moment this year. I thought for ages because I have done tons of really fun stuff this year and it was hard to find one moment. The moment I picked was me jumping off a diving board at Pt Erin even though we do not have a photo (The year sixes went at the end of the year) Okay here is my writing:
Splash! Miniscule droplets of blue water dance around me as I travel into the pool at immense speed. My face lights up as I hit the cool refreshing water. Cold tiles hit my warm feet as I anchored onto the bottom of the deep pool.
“Yeah!!” I yell excitedly.
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Joe
Kia Ora Joe I like the writing you did I did a writing to it’s about cricket. But your writing is really descriptive.
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